PebbleWheat's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[1996]

Has some potential but the melody a bit too all over the place to be catchy and too distinct to be an ambient song, choosing one or the other is better i think. From the genre i see you were going for ambient, so making the melody flow into the harmony would be a good way to do so, like adding alot of delay and release, something like that :)

RoachDoggJR69 responds:

Thanks for your feedback, i appreciate you giving it a listen, ill keep that in mind when searching for a consistent tone in future projects :)

[Soul Swing]

Godlike, right up my alley, i love this so much :D

KayozKun responds:

Thank you, I'm so glad you like it!

[On Top Of The Desert]

Damn rly rly good, what a gem.

A145 responds:

thank you, glad that you like it!

[Heat Loop]

Hi, it seems you are having the same problem as all newer producers out there, and that is you are trying to make the melody too complicated, if a note hangs for a bit that's fine, good even! You have good basics down, try to make melodies more understandable? singable? i dont know how to put it, a good melody often is easy to sing or hum, so singing or humming the melody before putting it down is a pretty good practice. Other than that, you already have pretty good sound choices, so keep working, and you will see improvement.

Cheers

Cutterion responds:

dude you are the reason why my songs sound better now
consider listening to my later tracks

[Electrocution]

Been going through more of your stuff, and I gotta say this is my favorite, just something about the melody and variation, very good! If you make a youtube channel let me know lol would add this to my playlist :)

Supermouk responds:

Haha thanks! I'd say my favorite is currently Octi, but this one is a close second. I do not have a youtube channel, maybe I will make one in the future. I have a SoundCloud

https://soundcloud.com/ultramouk

There are some tracks on there not on here, but they are old and not as good as the new stuff.
Most of them don't have names but feel free to check them out!!

[Haunted House]

Wow, really interesting melody, and the I like the vibe, looking forward to more of your stuff!

Supermouk responds:

Thank you :) You're the first person to review anything I've made it means a lot!

[Discovery]

Pretty good, not sure if this qualifies as dubstep tho. A bit more variation would be good though, i like the middle part where it changes up a bit, more of that might make the song more interesting

Maevings responds:

thanks for advice :)

[Supersonic]

Hmm descent, here are some things you could consider:
- The song takes too long to get to anywhere, about 4-8 beats per musical idea is much better
- The drums are a bit too boring, finding some better sounding drums goes a long way
- a lead melody would be good to make the song more memorable/catchy
- I like the bass, might be clipping a bit too much tho

Galaxymaster440 responds:

thank you, will im improve in the future

[Wave]

Good like always, maybe a little too much of a difference in loudness tho.

Sowbwi9 responds:

Thank you!! :D

[FORTRESS FURY]

Pretty sick

M10donewgrounds responds:

Thanks.