PebbleWheat's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Zen]

Nice!

[Heat Loop]

Hi, it seems you are having the same problem as all newer producers out there, and that is you are trying to make the melody too complicated, if a note hangs for a bit that's fine, good even! You have good basics down, try to make melodies more understandable? singable? i dont know how to put it, a good melody often is easy to sing or hum, so singing or humming the melody before putting it down is a pretty good practice. Other than that, you already have pretty good sound choices, so keep working, and you will see improvement.

Cheers

Cutterion responds:

dude you are the reason why my songs sound better now
consider listening to my later tracks

[Electrocution]

Been going through more of your stuff, and I gotta say this is my favorite, just something about the melody and variation, very good! If you make a youtube channel let me know lol would add this to my playlist :)

Supermouk responds:

Haha thanks! I'd say my favorite is currently Octi, but this one is a close second. I do not have a youtube channel, maybe I will make one in the future. I have a SoundCloud

https://soundcloud.com/ultramouk

There are some tracks on there not on here, but they are old and not as good as the new stuff.
Most of them don't have names but feel free to check them out!!

[my first work]

Well you still have a long way to go, but i appreciate that you put your songs out there, keep trying to improve :)

[Haunted House]

Wow, really interesting melody, and the I like the vibe, looking forward to more of your stuff!

Supermouk responds:

Thank you :) You're the first person to review anything I've made it means a lot!

[Jøsje d]

Hmm descent, pretty empty for most of the song though.

[Discovery]

Pretty good, not sure if this qualifies as dubstep tho. A bit more variation would be good though, i like the middle part where it changes up a bit, more of that might make the song more interesting

Maevings responds:

thanks for advice :)

[Track19]

Catchy melody, but drags on, and some sort of resolution/drop would make the song more structured.

[Supersonic]

Hmm descent, here are some things you could consider:
- The song takes too long to get to anywhere, about 4-8 beats per musical idea is much better
- The drums are a bit too boring, finding some better sounding drums goes a long way
- a lead melody would be good to make the song more memorable/catchy
- I like the bass, might be clipping a bit too much tho

Galaxymaster440 responds:

thank you, will im improve in the future