Stalactite Ball Hi i see you are starting out making music, and so far id say you are doing pretty good, the drums are there, the structure is descent, although drags alot. First few things I recommend is try adding more instruments because now it sounds too empty most of the time, and try to support the melody while doing so.
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JoJch responds:
Thanks for the feedback, I am really new to this and this genre of music. This was just a short Ep that I put together, I plan on spending a lot more time on this next full fledged album. I have noticed that I do struggle with finding things to add that correspond with the melody whilst being different.
4/5 is kinda sauce 4/5 is indeed sauce, but its already kinda a complicated rythm, so adding a complicated melody on top of that is not a good combination, but i am a sucker for different rythms, so I can see the potential on this one with a simpler melody and cleaner mixing
HoodedragonG7 responds:
I might come back to this one as it was a part of "jack's junk". thanks for the advice lad.
merry go round Very good start! I like the vibes, but waaay too short
Surkimus responds:
Thank you! It was originally meant to be a little music sting for a game, that's why it's so short.
Immortal Shine Definitely a good start, the second part sound off-key? Improving the drums, sounds a bit and adding some more variety, and could potentially become a banger :)
1996 Has some potential but the melody a bit too all over the place to be catchy and too distinct to be an ambient song, choosing one or the other is better i think. From the genre i see you were going for ambient, so making the melody flow into the harmony would be a good way to do so, like adding alot of delay and release, something like that :)
RoachDoggJR69 responds:
Thanks for your feedback, i appreciate you giving it a listen, ill keep that in mind when searching for a consistent tone in future projects :)
FABRIC Honestly didn't know what to expect when I was filtering by undiscovered artists today, but oh boy you did not disappoint, gonna look toward what you have in the future :)
Soul Swing Godlike, right up my alley, i love this so much :D
KayozKun responds:
Thank you, I'm so glad you like it!
On Top Of The Desert Damn rly rly good, what a gem.
A145 responds:
thank you, glad that you like it!
Wings Of Ash - The Fall Of Icarus Rly good!